George Baxter
What went well?
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The use of screenshots to further develop the
idea that’s being given.
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In depth analysis of all of the music videos and
use of screenshots to further gives his opinion on the music video.
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All work is well structured and clear for the
viewer to read and not look as theres not structure in his work.
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George has also covered many different aspects
of the music video such as mise – en – scene, editing etc.
Even better if?
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Make sure that the work is put up in
chronological order because if not your blog doesn’t have the professional
structure it should have.
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Should use different platforms for your work as
it will show off your different skills of various software’s. The use of only
one or two pieces of software doesn’t show the viewer or examiner that you’ve
got skills on other platforms.
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Go into more detail of other theorist than Propp
as you’ve only gone into real detail on his views.
Sasha Wallen
What went well?
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The structure of your is very good and is in
chronological order which makes it easier for the viewer to find what they want
to see and you’ve done that.
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Sasha use of English and grammar is at a high
level and shows the viewers that she has a large vocabulary understanding and
knows what she is talking about.
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Sasha’s knowledge of trailers and horror movies
is evident when looking at her blog and also good use of focus groups.
Even better if?
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Use different types of software to show off your
skills on various platforms
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